[PATCH v1 1/3] nvme-cli: follow-on discovery tweaks from thread

[Jay Freyensee]

Follow-on doc patch tweaks from discovery documentation discussion.

Signed-off-by: Jay Freyensee <james_p_freyensee at linux.intel.com>
Reviewed-by: Christoph Hellwig <hch at lst.de>

---
 Documentation/nvme-discover.txt | 27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/nvme-discover.txt b/Documentation/nvme-discover.txt
index d43f088..e9f04b2 100644
--- a/Documentation/nvme-discover.txt
+++ b/Documentation/nvme-discover.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ nvme-discover(1)
 
 NAME
 ----
-nvme-discover - Send Discovery requests to Fabrics Discovery Controllers.
+nvme-discover - Send Get Log Page request to Discovery Controller.
 
 SYNOPSIS
 --------
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ SYNOPSIS
 
 DESCRIPTION
 -----------
-Send one or more Discovery requests to a NVMe over Fabrics Discovery
+Send one or more Get Log Page requests to a NVMe-over-Fabrics Discovery
 Controller.
 
 If no parameters are given, then 'nvme discover' will attempt to 
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ find a /etc/nvme/discovery.conf file to use to supply a list of
 Discovery commands to run.  If no /etc/nvme/discovery.conf file
 exists, the command will quit with an error.
 
-Otherwise a specific Discovery Controller should be specified using the
---transport, --traddr and if nessecary the --trsvcid and a Diѕcovery
-request will be sent to the specified Discovery Controller.
+Otherwise, a specific Discovery Controller should be specified using the
+--transport, --traddr, and if necessary the --trsvcid flags. A Diѕcovery
+request will then be sent to the specified Discovery Controller.
 
 BACKGROUND
 ----------
@@ -44,6 +44,9 @@ contained in that NVMe subsystem on the NVMe Target.
 Note that the base NVMe specfication defines the NQN (NVMe Qualified
 Name) format which an NVMe endpoint (device, subsystem, etc) must
 follow to guarantee a unique name under the NVMe standard.
+In particular, the Host NQN uniquely identifies the NVMe Host, and
+may be used by the the Discovery Controller to control what NVMe Target
+resources are allocated to the NVMe Host for a connection.
 
 A Discovery Controller has it's own NQN defined in the NVMe-over-Fabrics
 specification, *nqn.2014-08.org.nvmexpress.discovery*.  All Discovery
@@ -68,8 +71,8 @@ OPTIONS
 -a <traddr>::
 --traddr=<traddr>::
 	This field specifies the network address of the Discovery Controller.
-	For transports using IP addressing (e.g. rdma) this should be an IPv4
-	address.
+	For transports using IP addressing (e.g. rdma) this should be an
+	IP-based (ex. IPv4) address.
 
 -s <trsvcid>::
 --trsvcid=<trsvcid>::
@@ -79,12 +82,10 @@ OPTIONS
  
 -q <hostnqn>::
 --hostnqn=<hostnqn>::
-	Overrides the default host NQN that identifies the NVMe Host.  If this
-	option is not specified the default is read from /etc/nvme/hostnqn or
-	autogenerated by the kernel (in that order).
-	The Host NQN uniquely identifies the NVMe Host, and may be used by the
-	the Discovery Controller to control what NVMe Target resources are
-	allocated to the NVMe Host for a connection.
+	Overrides the default host NQN that identifies the NVMe Host.  
+	If this option is not specified, the default is read from
+	/etc/nvme/hostnqn first. If that does not exist, the autogenerated
+	NQN value from the NVMe Host kernel module is used next.
 
 -r <filename>::
 --raw=<filename>::
-- 
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